05-01-2020, 12:06 AM
(04-01-2020, 09:58 PM)nanu05 Wrote: It's a great story but feel you have introduced too many characters into the story too soon.
The updates posting requires more storytelling. I haven't been able to keep track of your story.
It's like everytime I visit your thread I can't remember backstory.
It's not criticism. Hope you are able to post longer stories in one update.
Thanq for your reply... Wait for some action boy